The Surface Tension Of Dreams...
The Surface Tension Of Dreams...I burst into new knowledge and break its skin like overripe fruit,Tender, Tart,Sweet,The food of the Gods weighed out in hours and pages,Web and paper meld into mental...
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hell your muse literally has me howling with emotion ... xxx Liz CHEERS
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Everything speaks to me of great changes,The surface of the universe trembles and shakes,This small little planet a steed ridden hard and wet across the undulations,I wonder if it will fall from...
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I wonder if it will fall from beneath us when dream-skin breaks,Or if we'll survive the headlong pace racing to the bursting point.Your closing is S U P E R B!!!!!! That is the way to make your...
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The whole poem is brilliant Danespecially to those who watch our planet being abusedThe last line is very thought provoking
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Web and paper meld into mental gold and eerie blue mists of light,Waiting for the night to coalesce into a new understanding,This is outstanding writing, Dan ... the ending is one I won't soon forget.
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Ellen, thank you. I hope those changes can be shaped somehow into a beneficial thing. Bri, thank you. I think "not being forgotten" pulls at the heart of every poet to some degree. Maggie, it's lovely...
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Something weird occurred to me, as it has probably occurred to others; our solar system was formed about 4 billion years ago, from the remnants of a super nova, along with several other stars, and...
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i think I'll survive all my technology seems to give up the ghost...
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Curtis, I don't know if we'll ever know for certain, but it's a great theory. Thank you. Willow, I hope we'll all survive, and with a lot better tech and a healed natural world too. Thank you. Dan
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